tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14040026.post3580629971968314038..comments2020-09-28T14:46:18.332-07:00Comments on Kathleen Bradean: Erotica FailKathleen Bradeanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06347913255760493335noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14040026.post-31748351493225085752009-12-06T16:28:30.806-08:002009-12-06T16:28:30.806-08:00#7 is one of the best writing rules I've seen....#7 is one of the best writing rules I've seen. :-)<br /><br /><br />Verry funny! Although I love wearing garter belts and find them very comfortable, actually.Staciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07969399927758009095noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14040026.post-18768937244041718862009-12-06T14:51:36.415-08:002009-12-06T14:51:36.415-08:00Great read! Honestly, I actually like some of the...Great read! Honestly, I actually like some of the husband/wife pickup stories, but I've only read a few and they were well done. And I like touching myself for the reaction it brings to my guy. :) Too much information, but it's a heartfelt confession. And I learned early from an honest lover that it's a huge turn-on.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing great insights and a laugh! I love this.Darla M Sandshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11520094333004257139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14040026.post-37620812303675747692009-11-14T06:08:49.111-08:002009-11-14T06:08:49.111-08:00I'm not an erotica writer or reader, but this ...I'm not an erotica writer or reader, but this cracked me up. And like Chloe said, some of it is good advice for other genres too.Brynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07877229949224544344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14040026.post-31430514786417594992009-10-26T20:16:59.964-07:002009-10-26T20:16:59.964-07:00I'm glad someone else went on record as liking...I'm glad someone else went on record as liking to fondle her own boobs, so I didn't have to. (Oh, wait a minute. . . I just did.)ivanovahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13694244417925801824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14040026.post-32722339605151448552009-10-20T10:42:49.923-07:002009-10-20T10:42:49.923-07:00Been reading a bit lately, have we?
I did a simil...Been reading a bit lately, have we?<br /><br />I did a similar list on Twitter once, things not to do in an erotica tale. Thinking we ought to do that as a regular hashtag for Fridays, maybe? Could be fun ;)<br /><br />Oh, and if the amnesiac needs to look in the mirror to double check if her eyes are green and her dainty little push up bra her BFF made her buy still fits, she probably better grope her breasts while she's at it to make sure they're still there!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10832774182683343435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14040026.post-24667326081802710782009-10-19T18:16:45.565-07:002009-10-19T18:16:45.565-07:00Oh I have to disagree! The man/woman picking up a...Oh I have to disagree! The man/woman picking up a stranger that turns out to be a spouse? I love that story. Well written and it's a winner. <br />And I have to say that I do like playing with my own boobs during sex. Is that TMI? Well, I might be in a minority, but I don't think women ONLY do it in porn.<br />But I know some of the tired plots and tired cliches in ANY aspect of romance can be annoying.<br />Oh, and I HAVE thought "I feel vulnerable". LOL.Jennifer Leelandhttp://jenniferleeland.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14040026.post-46139673543720374392009-10-19T17:58:48.282-07:002009-10-19T17:58:48.282-07:00I love it Julie. I don't get to read much ero...I love it Julie. I don't get to read much erotic fiction but when I do I generally find at least one of those points you posted within the story. Great reminders (and resources for some writers out there...lol)!K.S. Manninghttp://ksmanning.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14040026.post-49576258945493841542009-10-19T15:53:35.612-07:002009-10-19T15:53:35.612-07:00Some of the things that you say not to do may actu...Some of the things that you say not to do may actually work when done right.<br /><br />The husband/wife as the stranger has been done before, so has many other plot points and storyline. But the key is to put a new twist on an old idea if possible. I happen to like that scenario in some stories.<br /><br />And yeah #2 does get old. And for the women groping, yeah generally women don't but again it can work if it's done right. <br /><br />I don't think I've read a story with "flashing emerald eyes". Mostly if blue, brown or black in the stories I read.<br /><br />I wholeheartedly agree about the stockings and garter. And also with #7 and #8 and #10.<br /><br />Great post.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14040026.post-75523950737964961282009-10-19T14:04:22.757-07:002009-10-19T14:04:22.757-07:00You know, some of those things are true for any so...You know, some of those things are true for any sort of writing, no matter the subgenre. I find a lot of those, especially #2, #4, #7, and #8 in romance fiction, too. <br /><br />But those are great reminders. Thanks!Chloe Devlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13468735874871312451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14040026.post-16463696307560015032009-10-14T15:41:04.382-07:002009-10-14T15:41:04.382-07:00That just made me snort tea out of my nose. And n...That just made me snort tea out of my nose. And not in a fetish way. Though, I did want to buy the Earl Grey, but my husband - he's so much smarter than me, it makes me feel vulnerable - he said I had to go with the orange pekoe.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com